[character sheet] Does it seem clear to you?

Post finished and unfinished work here for critique and appraisal.
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Anaphase
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[character sheet] Does it seem clear to you?

Post by Anaphase »

Whee .. first post! :)

Does this character sheet seem clear to you, or is it confusing in any way? It's my draik, Slykae's, new character sheet.

Click here for full-sized version! (deviantART page.)

Thanks!
- Anaphase
Saving to make a new draik sibling (100k/2.8mil) .. want to donate? Your name will get put on the little guy's page when he's created!
Cheese
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Post by Cheese »

You missed a word at the end of the description for the wing markings.
Anaphase
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Post by Anaphase »

Cheese wrote:You missed a word at the end of the description for the wing markings.
Oooh .. thank you very much =)

Fixed it now.

- Anaphase.
Saving to make a new draik sibling (100k/2.8mil) .. want to donate? Your name will get put on the little guy's page when he's created!
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