Rae//New JUBJUB art//taking crit PLEASE!

[goofy_love_]

Here are some jubjubs I made- I am just learning how to use paint/photoshop- so please- the more crit the better!

EDIT- Those are the first ones that I made -points upwards-, what do you think about my new ones?

Edit (again)- I have made a royalboy jubjub- TADAA!

[AngharadTy]

The eyes look a bit weird, like there's a small pupil and a large pupil. Try looking at the actual jubjub art, not just of the pets, but also the art from caption contest, Neopian Times, etc. You can also Google tutorials on eyes; they'll teach you how to place the light spots, to indicate where the light comes from.

(Art here is a very slow forum, by the way. Don't expect many responses, in general, and especially don't expect them fast.)

[goofy_love_]

Thanx for the Crit- and the tips- I drew really pretty jubjubs on paper- but then when I tried to draw them on photoshop, well, you can see the results. I will try and load the ones I drew on paper later on!
(Thanx for the note about responses!)

EDIT- I made a new eye! What do you think?


See my first post to see my revised jubjubs
EDIT (again)- Here is the scan-

[bonecrivain]

Aww, that royal jubjub is really very cute.

[goofy_love_]

Well thank you! I am very proud of it... now, what to make next... hmmmm.... I just made the Fire Jubjub for fun- I really with that TNT would relase one- anywho- I don't like the fire jubjub as much...