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Wow, thank you ^^ Finally a 'encouraging critique' comment. I love those x3Gazella Dama wrote:Eh. There's a limited amount of comments to be given, because it's a WIP in progress and we've no idea what you planned on doing with the background, if anything.
I'm not sure how much more you plan on refining it, so I can only critique the current anatomy and coloring style. As for the former, as several people have said, he does look rather doggish, just by the way he's sitting and the big blocky muzzle. Reptiles, especially crocodiles, tend to have more "evenly" distributed mandibles. That is... if you moved the mouthline a little farther up on the muzzle to make the top half more equivalent in size to the lower jaw, I think it could be a bit more krawk-ish. The lower jaw he's got right now doesn't exactly look powerful enough to chomp something to bits X)
As for the coloring, it looks a little sloppy right now, though it's a WIP so as I said, I dunno how much you plan on refining it. I would try to block in bigger areas of shadow, if I were you. Choose one light source and don't be afraid to make big patches of shadow on, say, one entire side of his body if it's facing away from the light. It makes it look more dramatic.
I do quite like the reflection, though :3 Nice job.
Nope, doesn't mean that, and it was directed to the bg people, not you ^^; But thanks for pointing it out for me.Everyone knows what a WIP is, seriously ~ @___@
But that doesn't mean Krawks are dogs, right?
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