![Image](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v369/anzuronamin/ribbonfix.png)
If anyone could redline it, point out where I should try something different, or anything of the like, please tell me. This picture is more or less practice, but I just need some ideas on where I might have messed up.
Also, pay no attention to the doodles in the back that you may be able to see faintly >___> My scanner popped them up in the picture. They're from the page behind this one in my sketchbook.