I'm not going to redline, as I find redlining to be intrusive (imposes one artist's style upon another's)... but! I did scribble a bit to illustrate the point I wanna make. >> By all means, use or discard my thoughts as you like.
SKETCHIEZ
...my torso here is actually incorrect because I dramatized the effect of the ribs+abs, and I made the hips too large.
Hands
- Palm large enough to cover a cheek, fingers at least as long as the palm
- not all the fingers are the same length
- My favorite tutorial on the hand:
here.
Torso
- The torso is
a kidney bean.
- It's also broken up into
different sections, and, yes, the ribs do curve outwards.
- I think you had a better idea of how the torso worked before you made it flatter.
Hair
- Every strand is separate! In anime styles, this tends to get simplified, but don't be afraid to add more lines and detail out the flow of the hair anyways.
Legs
- I tend to measure my legs as... Thighs are about as long as the torso (close enough that the knee can nearly touch the shoulder), and the calf tends to be 3/4th the length of that, with the ankle and heel making up the rest of the length.